a story i wrote awhile ago... the bear rescue

That's a great story! ;)I hope I'll be reading more of your stories soon!!

Awesome story! you need to write more

Chapter 2



“La, la, la …” sang my sister. “Honey, clam down, it’s a stuff animal.” Our mom said. My sister gasped and covered her bear’s ears. “Mommy! They are not just stuffed animal!” she said sounding hurt. Boy, does she have an imagination. “But sweethear-“she dared not to go any further because she saw a tear swell up in her eye. Just because Caitlyn is 9, doesn’t mean she isn’t a crier. .As we pulled up in the driveway, my sister ran in the house. When I walked into my room I saw her on my computer. “What are you doing?” I asked. “I’m adopting her online and telling BI about her.” She answered. “Lace! Caitlyn! Time for lunch!” our dad called. “Coming!” we chorused together. When my sister began picking up her bear, I cautioned her not to so we don’t have to go through the same thing. Listening to my advice, she put her down.

(fudge’s short’s POV)

As I looked around, I noticed another Build-a-bear with me. “Hi!” she said. “I’m Ally!” “Hi. I’m f-fudge.” I stuttered. “Look at this room! It’s HUGE!” she said exaggerating the word “Huge”. “c’mon! Let’s go get some lunch with them!” she said starting to run. “Whoa, whoa, whoa. Didn’t you hear? We can’t tell them were alive! They’ll freak out! Humans can be real blabber mouths.” I reminded her. Didn’t a wise bear tell her? “I know, I know. We have to tell them.” She said. have you heard?- adults can’t no either! They’ll go sell it to the press! The only adult who knows in the entire world is Maxine, the creator.” “Do you hear foot steps?” I asked her. “There coming! Were telling them!” she said. “Give them a week, and when they go to school, we will debate it.” “Fine.” She said finally agreeing. As we hurried back to our positions, we were finally adopted on Buildabearville.com.

^^ Brilliant chapter 2!

Chapter 3


As we ran in our room, I noticed that my bear’s, smile looked different, like she was having trouble trusting something. When it was our bed time, we took off our bear’s clothes and fell asleep.

Ally’s short POV

While they were asleep, I glanced at Fudge, knowing she was wrong for not trusting them. After an hour we carefully got out the bed and sat in a chair, and quietly whispered to each other, trying not to wake them. “I’m telling them NOW!” I said yelling in the softest way. “No, don’t! You promised!” Fudge hissed.
I can’t hide it from them anymore. “Humph.” I said.

NEXT DAY

Lacey’s POV

While we got ready for school, I saw my crazy sister say “Bye Ally, I’ll miss you. You be good while I’m gone.” “I will. I promise.” Ally said. Caitlyn and my eyes got HUGE! And I’m not exaggerating. “Did your bear just TALK!?!” I said in disbelieve. “Girls!” our mom said. “Yea mommy.” My sister answered. “School is canceled for the next 2 days for report cards!” she continued. “Ok.” Caitlyn said. “Let’s get back to the issue, your bear just talked! Why?!?” I said, my sister is already annoying, but this is just weird! “Well, its call SBM. It can make bears talk, walk, and love. That’s why we can move, and your love is activating the magic. “li-i-Lizzy, can you move and all that?” Caitlyn asked making sure. “Yes, I can. I told Ally to not to until a week, and she didnt listen to me.” Fudge answered “What does SBM stand for?” I asked. “Special Bear Magic. Max-“my bear was interrupted by Ally. “Maxine created it! Let’s go to Build-A-Bear Workshop. We need new clothes.” “o-ok we’ll go later today after lunch. Sounds good?” I said. “Yea!” They chorused together.

Love chapter 3 ^^

aww man, i only written 4 chapters, that means i have to start re-writing them again. XD

Chapter 4
When we arrived home, I saw a note saying, “Hi sweetheart. Your father and I are at the spa. We will be back soon. I thinkyour old enough not to need a sitter. Love you. –Mom.” While we were watching TV, our bears said that they were tired. 3 hours after they fell asleep, Caitlyn ran to the room, to see Fudge and Ally missing. My sister yelled with fear. I couldn’t help but to be scared. As I entered the room, my sister was hugging the blanket that they were sleeping on and crying. “What are we going to do, Lacey? I love them!” she shouted. “Maybe they’re playing hid-n-seek…..” I suggested.
“I LOOKED Lacey!” “Ok. Let’s look for a clue.” I thought. “Were not detectives! Please help me look!” She pleaded. “Ok. I’ll check my email.” When I opened it up, I saw that I had a new message. It read “I have you dumb, precious bears. Bring $500.00 by Thursday to 1354 East Highway Dr. for each of your bears to Hollywood, California. Goodbye, and see you soon… Hopefully. – Ms. Ravnight.” My face turned numb. “What is it?” Caitlyn asked. As I gave her the computer, her eyes swelled with tears, and mine too. “Where are we going to get that much money?” I questioned. “We just need $1000.00 not hard.” Caitlyn said without thinking. I made a face between ‘Are you serious?’ and ‘Are you 9 or 5?’ “Sorry.” She mumbled. “Ok, adding the taxi, airline, and hotel, that’s means we need at least...” I breathe deeply. “Over 1500 dollars.” I said doubtfully. “Grandma had a fund with money for us, but we need 200 more.” My sister breathe heavily. “I was hoping it wouldn’t come to this.” She said stooping down under her bed. When I saw her bring out a box, it was loaded with cash. “Whoa!” I said in amazement. “How much money is that?” “Near $500.00. I was saving it for our first bears, but I think this is important.” Great, our plans are working out after all. I had a huge smirk on my face. “I’ll get the money from Grandma.” I said. As I was running, I had ‘What ifs’ in my mind. When one left, another one came and took its place. ‘What if they are hurt? What if they get lost? What if … What if…..’ This was my first time I was this scared. We need to find our bears, Fast!

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